Something borrowed

It was the ‘something borrowed’ that meant so much to Laura. She’d had a pocket especially sewn into the wedding dress to keep it safe. Her grandfather’s pocket watch. Nothing special you might think and it wasn’t at the time he’d given it to her, just sentimentality but when her mother died it took on a whole new meaning.

It had been sitting on her mother’s kitchen table when Laura had collected the dress and taken it to her for safe-keeping. Only now it was her mother she wanted to keep safe; buy her a new heart, steal one, borrow one.

Remaining on her bedside table or in her jeans pocket for the three week’s between her mother’s death and the day she became Laura Elliott.

As the music started, Laura turned to her father and they both stepped forward. She wasn’t sure whether it was his lack of emotion that was holding hers back but she was grateful.


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