Trillpower

Eddie stared at the leaflet. He’d read it dozens of times… hundreds maybe, almost to the point of reciting it word-for-word, even able to explain the difficult Latin-sounding words.

It was the pictures that scared him. He couldn’t understand why they had to make them so graphic… scare youngsters, he guessed, although everyone knew that smoking was bad – easy to start, nigh on impossible to give up. He’d tried once, a mixture of dread and relief but it hadn’t lasted long. He’d even gone to a group session, taken advice from a long-time ex-smoker but now he sought a different kind of expert; a more expensive one, but he valued his marriage more than the little white sticks that had ruled his life for far too long.

So, as he sat waiting for his turn, he listened to noises of chickens, horses and cows, and wondered what farmyard animal the hypnotist would turn him into.

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