Not even as affection

Bun? Elle thought, who calls someone ‘bun’ as an endearment? She had thought it quite sweet, especially so early on in their courtship. ‘Courtship’, she laughed at the word. Then he looked at her and she stopped laughing.

“Hun,” he repeated and for a moment she was disappointed, ‘hun’ now too ordinary, almost something a cashier at Asda would say, although Elle usually got ‘pet’ or ‘me duck’.

She wondered why he was holding his hand out but then realised he was glaring at the jar in front of her.

“Sorry,” she said and handed it to him, just a grunt in thanks.

So it wasn’t ‘hun’ either, but honey, and that not even as affection.

She watched him eat… heavy, like a rugby player, although she thought they’d be more gentlemanly.

The sex was good… with him, not the rugby player, although given the chance…

Now he was holding out his mug, perfectly capable, she knew, of pouring a second cup of tea, but his feet were clearly under her table in more ways than one.

“No!” she said, the richness of her voice taking them both by surprise. “I’m not your wife… not your mother and certainly not your slave.” She put down her tea, stood up, and pointed towards the door.

He grunted again, put on his jacket and got back on his milk float.

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